Copy Refinement: E-commerce Product Description Editing (Before & After)

Project: Comprehensive editing and proofreading of a product description for the 'ZenFlow' Smart Yoga Mat.

Focus: The goal was to transform a raw draft containing grammatical errors and poor syntax into polished, high-converting e-commerce copy. This sample demonstrates meticulous language correction, tone adaptation, and strategic rewriting to significantly boost clarity and purchase motivation.